Sherlock beta?

[eponymous_rose]

Uh, I kinda committed casefic based on the finale. Anyone willing to do a fairly quick beta? (I'd like to get it out of my system before I decide to stick it on my hard drive and forget about it.)

It's about 6000 words (I know) and focuses on John, with a secondary spotlight on Sally Donovan, and it's gen. Pretty standard for me - some language, some violence. Any takers? Anyone familiar with the city of London would be especially nice, since I'd like to not screw up too badly when it comes to places and travel times, and I'm mostly operating based on half-remembered jet-lagged visits years and years ago.

I've screened comments, so you can leave an e-mail address without fear of the spambots, if that suits you better. Thank you so much!

Edit: That was quick, thank you!