You've just made my day. I love this story. So much snark injected into every little bit and you've got such wonderful original concepts and I even like Matt (and I usually hate OC's). I think my favourite part would have to be this:
She waved a hand in the air, and Matt winced as she nearly took out his eye with her grand gesticulating. “-maker of fairly good omelettes."
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Date: 2008-01-08 12:55 pm (UTC)You've just made my day. I love this story. So much snark injected into every little bit and you've got such wonderful original concepts and I even like Matt (and I usually hate OC's). I think my favourite part would have to be this:
She waved a hand in the air, and Matt winced as she nearly took out his eye with her grand gesticulating. “-maker of fairly good omelettes."