This is completely fantastic, hon; well-thought out, perfectly characterized for all involved, and it even has everything you'd want for Ian and Barbara - adventure, UST, romance, sex, happiness, ever after - all of it. I love the non-linearity and I love all the guest stars. In particular:
"It's enough to give anyone a headache," Harry said sympathetically.
"Oh, Ian's just easily baffled," said Barbara
Made me laugh out loud; and
"It's a lovely elbow," said Barbara politely.
"Thank you," Ian said. "But I have heard good things about certain other portions of my anatomy."
Is too perfectly wonderful for words.
Thanks so much for participating in the ficathon; this is a marvellous piece of work.
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Date: 2008-03-17 02:38 am (UTC)"It's enough to give anyone a headache," Harry said sympathetically.
"Oh, Ian's just easily baffled," said Barbara
Made me laugh out loud; and
"It's a lovely elbow," said Barbara politely.
"Thank you," Ian said. "But I have heard good things about certain other portions of my anatomy."
Is too perfectly wonderful for words.
Thanks so much for participating in the ficathon; this is a marvellous piece of work.