I'm almost afraid to praise you, since it will probably stop you from working on the Bigbang, but this was just too cute. I especially loved Sarah Jane and Harry playing the question game. (Didn't Charley and C'rizz do that as well?) Harry is really adorable in this part.

Gasp! Poor Doctor! (Four does seem to fall over quite a bit in general, though.) And they can't go back to the TARDIS! And they're in the middle of the freaking desert! You cruel, cruel, fabulous thing, you.

Looking forward to the next bit from your pen, whether it be this fic or Bigbang! (PS: AIM me sometime!)