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northern_magic ([personal profile] northern_magic) wrote in [personal profile] eponymous_rose 2007-08-13 05:32 am (UTC)

Grats on finishing your music exam! *cheers*
I'll leave you a much more detailed review when it isn't 40 mins to midnight *nods* but I have to ask re the line:

“You won’t mind if I call you Fred, will you?” the Doctor asked sword-man brightly.

Have you ever read So You Want to Be A Wizard by Diane Duane?

Page 80/81:
'(True,) the white hole said. (My name is Khairelikoblepharehglukumeilichephreidosd'enagouni--) and at the same time he went flickering through a pattern of colors that was evidently the visual translation.
"Ky-elik-" Nita began.
"Fred," Kit said quickly. "That was the only part I got anyway." '

Thought: I loved how you pulled off the Doctor's moral analysis of the Cutelli race. It sounded very much in character.
And now I'm off before I start coining words.

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